I have not read "Luke Skywalker and the Shadows of Mindor" or whatever it's called so I am only going by Mace Windu's book, "Shatterpoint."

I really enjoyed the book. And I really liked Kar Vastor and his Akks (Guards and Dogs)

So, I thought I would attempt to stat them although I am certain someone may have already.

Kar Vastor, Lor Pelek (Just in case another version is done)
Base: Med.
Faction: Fringe
Cost: 40
HPs: 100
Def 19
Atk 11
Dam 20

SA:
Korrunai, Unique
Melee Attack, Twin
Stealth
Lightsaber Resistance (for his vibroshields)
Stable Footing (for the Jungle "parting" for him)
Parry
Bloodthirsty (+10 Damage on melee attacks against enemies at half Hit Points or less)

Force 3
Sith Rage
Overwhelming Force

CE: Non-unique followers gain Bloodthirsty

Mace: "Can any of them survive? Cast out alone, without supplies, without weapons—"
Kar: "I did."


Akk Guard
Base: Med
Faction: Fringe
Cost 18
HP 60
Def 16
Atk 7
Damage 20

SA:
Korrunai, Melee Attack
Empathy
LS Resistance (the vibro shields again)
Stable Footing
Stealth

"The Akk Guards serve the Lor Pelek, Kar Vastor, without fear and with brutal efficiency."

Akk Dogs
Base: Large
Cost 20
HP 70
Def 17
Atk 8
Damage 20

SA:
Savage, Melee Attack
Rapport (Costs 1 point less if within the same squad of Korrunai characters)
Damage Reduction 10
Vicious Attack
Charging Attack +10

"Akk Dogs were often trained to herd Grassers or to be lethal killing machines"


Edits: Changed Kar's CE to affect Non-unique followers. Changed Akk Guard's Bloodthirsty to Stealth. Changed cost of Akk Dogs to 20, modified flavor text, and added Charging Assault +10

Cool. I like Kar. The Akk Dogs seem overcosted for only 1 attack, even if they do have Viscious. I mean, compare them to the Massifs (which is kind of what I'm guessing you based them on).

And there's no point for the Akk Guard to have Bloodthirsty to start with, as it makes Kar's CE useless, lol. I definitely like Kar's CE though. Would be cool to have it grant Bloodthirsty to Fringe in general, not just the Korrunai, but I know you were going for flavor. I'd love to see the Bloodthirsty ability a bit more, and on better pieces than the CW Aqualish.

Cool ideas.

Well, I made some changes.

I hope I didn't make the Akk Guards too cheap and the Akk Dogs too costly.

Cool, I think that is much better. DR10 is a neat idea on the Akk dogs. I really enjoyed that book, and I think you've captured the general flavor here. Nice work.